tennyson, to movies
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MattMerk, to writing
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An excerpt from an email I just sent: “By the way, Aristotle’s POETICS is absolutely NOT an easy read, so when you hear Crag Mazin [a pretty successful Hollywood writer] say that, just know he’s lying to you! … unless you are already an expert on Ancient Greek society, dithyrambic poetry, and music of the lyre. Then it’s a breeze.”
#Writing #ScreenWriting #Filmmaking

WTL,
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@MattMerk Oh, I'm on the train with you. 🤣

MattMerk,
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@WTL I was actually talking about just that podcast, and exactly that episode. Craig recommends reading Poetics, and that’s when he says, “It’s an easy read. You’ll finish it in about half an hour,” then calls it, “a good bathroom book.” 😂 Not one bit of that is true!!!

… except for maybe the good bathroom book part. 🤣

gracefrench, to Writers
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Join my new server to find co-writers, betas and editors.

Find each other and leave, or stick around to network, showcase portfolios, and benefit from each other's experience.

  • Family friendly.
  • lgbtqia+ safe space.

https://discord.gg/UamEUGbM

#writer #writers #editor #editors #beta #betareaders #writing #writingcommunity #pleaseboost #boost #server #discord #screenwriting

strypey, to screenwriting
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"At the end of the film, I had to smile, recognizing how Shyamalan has essentially ditched a payoff. He knows, as we all sense, that payoffs have grown boring. The mechanical resolution of a movie's problems is something we sit through at the end, but it's the setup and the buildup that keep our attention."

#RogerEbert, 2002

https://web.archive.org/web/20110606155241/http://rogerebert.suntimes.com/apps/pbcs.dll/article?AID=/20020802/REVIEWS/208020305/1023

Maybe we were all sick of set up and payoff in 2002, but by 2022 we were desperate for screenwriting capable of doing it well.

#screenwriting

nicholas_saunders, to Starwars

https://newsletter.mathewingram.com/the-idea-of-darth-vader-being-lukes-father-started-as-a-joke/#:~:text=Lucas%20was%20struggling%20to%20come,make%20Darth%20Vader%20Luke's%20father.%E2%80%9D

'When Lucas described his struggles with writing the Empire story, Huyck joked, “You can always make Darth Vader Luke’s father.”'

@blogdiva

#starwars #darthvader #vader #movies #screenwriting

I had thought that it was his wife, but the point stands.

#ego

Thorsted, to screenwriting
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Friday! I googled Movie Magic Sex so you don't have to. You're welcome. https://preservation.tylerthorsted.com/2024/04/26/scheduling-export/

ShaulaEvans, to filmmaking
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Well done match cuts bring me great joy.

Match cut: in film, a cut from one shot to another in which the composition of the two shots are matched by the action or subject and subject matter.

By well done I mean at both a technical and conceptual level, in a way that serves the story.

#Filmmaking #Screenwriting @film

ShaulaEvans, to writing
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I just watched a well executed opening scene in a pilot. That I have seen dozens of times before in dozens of other stories.

If I had given notes on the script, the note here would be: "What can you show us that we haven't seen a dozen times before?"

@film 1/2

ShaulaEvans, to filmmaking
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I love it when any filmmakers but especially indie or low-/no-budget filmmakers use sound creatively and with intention.

You can make an audience believe they have seen so much on screen if you just let them hear it. Their minds will fill in the rest.

#Filmmaking #Screenwriting @FolkloreFilmFans

gocu54,

@ShaulaEvans @film this. you understand the importance of sound. From independent films to sonic masterpieces, sound and the way its used makes the experience more than how it looks IMO.

davidaugust, to screenwriting
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davidaugust, to screenwriting
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In movies, people never give people the charger that comes with the burner phone:

bad guy: keep this with you, and when I call, you answer.

good guy: ok.

(time passes, phone runs out of charge, turns off, good guy can’t find a charger that fit that phone, hostage is toast)

This is a rewrite of an earlier thought I had 😝

#screenwriting #film #movies #screenplay

davidaugust,
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@CStamp yeah! It just never comes up during a sequence.

davidaugust,
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@olav right? 😝

davidaugust, to screenwriting
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Finished writing a comedy sketch, send it off...

...and what do you know: turns out there's a comma missing.

Ah, the beauty of catching it after the email has gone out.

skribe,
@skribe@aus.social avatar

@davidaugust instant fail right there 😂.

I'd be surprised if they even notice, mate.

That_Damn_Frank,
@That_Damn_Frank@toot.pizza avatar

@davidaugust

♫ Punctuation Injunction..
♫ What's your function...?

♫ Gonna get Comedy there
♫ If you're very careful...

davidaugust, to sketch
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Did I just check the weather on Saturday in Tehran for a script I'm writing so I could have a character mention the nice weather? Yes.

Will anyone else ever check the weather to be sure it was, in fact, nice? No.

So will anyone else know whether I made up the good weather or not? No, but I'll know. I'll know.

(it was in the 60s [high teens in C])

#sketch #comedy #SketchComedy #screenwriting #writing #script #research

AoaI,
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@davidaugust Fact checking ones self doesn't hurt and yes, you feel good about being right.

sfwrtr,
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@davidaugust

I did check the earth phase on the moon when I wrote a one-off soul travel short story that takes place in part on the moon. The date is an important element in the story..

Will anyone else ever check the weather to be sure it was, in fact, nice? No.

Weather/Earth phase? Same difference. 😋​

We b authors, yes?

Liquidream, to gamedev
@Liquidream@mastodon.gamedev.place avatar

Holy crap! 😳 Slowly catching up on the @adventurex recordings when this talk by Christopher Morrison just flipped my (novice) understanding of "Story" upside down! 🙃
Click play & enjoy the ride... 😅
#GameDev #Screenwriting
https://youtu.be/oH51Rxi9nS4

davidaugust, to sketch
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Just submitted a sketch about President Cleveland coming out of retirement to be a running mate for 45. In doing research for it I have at least tripled my knowledge of Grover Cleveland 😝

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