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anderlandbooks, to random German
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Jun 1. Intro and update: Introduce yourself and/or update us on your writing journey since your last intro.

Hello! I'm a passionate writer using two different pen names, avid reader, and tiny publisher. Stories are what make my life special to me.

And the update is: is live! And free for a few days on Kindle!
If you want to read, this link will take you to your respective store:

https://mybook.to/ToThePromisedLand

nautilebleu,
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@anderlandbooks I need to bring back my father’s Kindle from the dead but I manage to get it ! Now 633 pages to go!

nautilebleu,
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@anderlandbooks did you read the comics ? ☺️

nautilebleu,
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@anderlandbooks thanks ! ☺️ if you want to give me some feedback, don’t hesitate 🙌

nautilebleu, to random
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01/05/2024 Introduce your setting as if it's a character in your story.

The McAlistair mansion POV: “I’m currently the host of Esther and her strange little maid. Before I belonged to Esther’s husband, but he wasn’t with them when they came back from the colonies. Something has happened there, I don’t know what, but it makes Esther ill. The little strange maid tries her best to help.”

[Illustration: The mansion]

nautilebleu,
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nautilebleu,
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#wordweavers 24/05/2024 While drafting, do you avoid or binge watch similar material?

I have a very good memory (for this kind of things only, don’t count on me to remember to buy the milk) & I like to do references everywhere I can. For example, I remember this panel from being an Hergé’s favourite because of the movement. I decided to reuse the idea, each doctor is one step away from removing his hat.

[Illustrations: Excerpts from Chapter One]
#fediart #mastodonart #mastoart #creativetoots

Excerpt from Esther and Erie Chapter One: The doctors enter Esther’s mansion following Erie. Each is at one step of removing his hat.

18+ nautilebleu,
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#wordweavers 25/05/2024 How often do your characters think of death?

Death is in the mind of most characters:

⁃ Esther’s husband is an old man obsessed by his death;
⁃ The Chamberlain were also old. They tried a dark magic spell to try to be rejuvenated;
⁃ Esther have always in mind the suicide of his young brother.
⁃ The lost of her grandfather was devastating for Erie.

[Illustrations: my characters facing death]
#fediart #mastodonart #mastoart #creativetoots

Inktober 2020 day 23: The Chamberlain just sacrificed a girl in order to do a dark spell that is supposed to rejuvenate them. But it will only lead them to the path of exile.
Inktober 2023 day 20: the suicide of Esther’s brother: he throws himself through a window on a cold morning
Inktober 2022 day 15: the funerals of Erie’s grandfather. Young Erie is mourning with Mrs. Helen next to her while the body is burned

nautilebleu,
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26/05/2024 What childhood similarities do your MC and antagonist share?

Never thought about that but they have pretty much same origins… and yet their paths have diverged.

They are both born in the upper-class but not in the aristocracy. Their fathers were both hardworking but if Esther’s was successful, D’Arcy’s one never managed to recognised as inventor. Absorbed in his lab, he failed to see how bad his daughter was turning.

[Illustrations: Lady d’Arcy youth]

Excerpt from Inktober 2020: Young d’Arcy and Sir James blood pact. After that, they will be bound together
Excerpt from Inktober 2020: Quickly D’Arcy and James started to bully and torment everyone who are not in their club

nautilebleu,
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#wordweavers 26/05/2024 What would your ideal writing comics group be like?

In the early 2000, I was in a aspiring comics artists group. Some were already published, several were about to succeed (and are now quite successful authors) and some like me were not ready and I missed the bandwagon.

The group has split but I never found such a emulation.

nautilebleu,
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#wordweavers 28/05/2024 Did your MCs have comfort objects they carried as a child? Now?

Living in a family dominated by an abusive father, Esther certainly needs one. She can’t really escape him, but when she was riding her poney, at least she had a few moments of peace. That’s why finding her saddle makes her so nostalgic.

[Illustrations: Excerpt from Inktober 2023 - Esther youth]

nautilebleu,
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#wordweavers 29/05/2024 How would your MC handle finding a spider in their home?

In the dream told during Inktober 2023, Esther was in an attic full of dust and spiders’ cobwebs. She’s not happy but she doesn’t panic either.

In real life, McAlistair’s mansion is obviously full of dust and cobwebs when she comes back from the colonies. She asks Erié to clean up, something the maid does swiftly in the rooms they occupy.

[Illustrations: Excerpt from Inktober 2023 - Esther youth]

Excerpt from Inktober 2023: She has to her path through crates covered in dust and cobwebs.

nautilebleu,
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#wordweavers 30/05/2024 Are you comfortable writing from the POV of a child? Written any?

The whole Inktober 2023 was a POV from a young Esther in her early teen years. Not exactly a child but it’s the nearest I’ve done.

[Illustrations: Excerpt from Inktober 2023 - Esther youth]

NaraMoore, to writing
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#writerscoffeeclub #writing 28. Do you have advice for other writers you have yet to hear from different sources?

Decide if you're in it for the money, recognition, or yourself. Then set your goals accordingly.

nautilebleu,
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@NaraMoore « Money for nothing and chicks for free »

Excerpt from the clip of Money for Nothing by Dire Straits

anderlandbooks, to random German
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#writerscoffeeclub May 25
Do you use a cover artist or design your own covers? Share your cover art.

I used to hire cover artists. Meanwhile, however, I had some bad experiences and gained more skills myself. I surely do not range among the top cover artists - but truth be told: We all know how hard it is to make some good money with books. Thus, I've done the newest ones myself. The latest is for #OdysseyToThePromisedLand after some very good input from folks here.

nautilebleu,
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@anderlandbooks This one is far better than the one you previously shared! I like it shows Katja who seems to invite the reader to follow her

nautilebleu,
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@anderlandbooks I’m glad if I could have been of some help ☺️ Now this cover tells a story (and hopefully, the same as the book! )

nautilebleu,
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@anderlandbooks 🙌and in case you want to read my comics I put the digital editions online today https://ko-fi.com/nautilebleu/shop 🔥

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