sabderemane, 5 months ago

@paulox you made it! 😍 I have almost finished mine, I will publish it soon 🥳

paulox, 5 months ago

@sabderemane I can't wait to read it. 🤗
Buon 2024 🎊

drewbrew, 5 months ago

@paulox happy new year to you as well!

This was the closest thing to a mistake I could find and it boils down to "English is hard":

Instead of

> I tried for the first time e-bikes in the mountains on Voltigno plateau

Try:

> I tried riding e-bikes for the first time in the mountains on the Voltigno Plateau

It typically flows better if you put the prepositional phrase after the direct object in English, but there's nothing wrong with the way you wrote it. Keep it up!

paulox, 5 months ago

@drewbrew thanks Drew, I really appreciate your suggestion and I've updated the article. 😃

CodenameTim, 5 months ago

@paulox this is a great post. I do wish it contained the classic Paolo photos, especially from your travel excursions!

paulox, 5 months ago

@CodenameTim I finally added some pictures in my article 🙂

CodenameTim, 5 months ago

@paulox perfection! 🥳

paulox, 5 months ago

@CodenameTim that was the original plan 😉
Then I decided to publish it as it was, but my plan is to add pictures and link in next days 🤞

ryancheley, 5 months ago

@paulox great article! I really like the last line, “I’m sure I’ve made several mistakes in this article and I thank you if you point them out to me but I decided it was better to publish it like this than not to publish it at all.” … I didn’t find any mistakes, but I agree that putting something out there that isn’t perfect is better than waiting for perfect. Now, I need to try and get my year in review finished 😁

paulox, 5 months ago

@ryancheley thanks for your feedback. I'm waiting for your review. 🤗

hamatti, 5 months ago

@paulox Happy new year Paolo!

paulox, 5 months ago

@hamatti thanks 🤗
Happy new year to you too 🎊